About sharon

As the founder and head of TWP Marketing & Technical Communications, Sharon Bailly has more than 25 years of experience as a professional business and technical writer for large and small companies and nonprofits throughout the U.S. Her articles on writing have appeared in Minority Engineer, Women’s Business, New Hampshire Business Review and other publications, and she has presented writing workshops at business groups, nonprofit organizations and individual company sites. TWP provides accurate, exciting and focused content for websites, blogs, brochures, newsletters, success stories, user manuals, presentations and white papers both online and on paper.

The Right Way to Say No to Your Customers

We’ve all had customers (internal or external) who ask us to work with a deadline that is too tight, on a project outside our expertise, with too few resources, or with other challenges that we simply can not handle. So here are several ways to say No to your customers and still keep their good will:

  • My schedule is packed right now but I can get to this on [date] and then it will be my priority.
  • This is outside my area of expertise but I can recommend [person].
  • Let’s talk more about what you need. [Look for a compromise.]
  • Some of my other customers have handled this situation this way [explain].
  • May I offer you an alternative?
  • I can do that, but I will have to [charge more, call in help, delay their other project, or ask for some other accommodation].
  • I may know someone who can start work on this [sooner, cheaper, faster]. Would you like a referral?
  • If you will [make a change, talk to someone else about your priorities, do this research or preparation], then I can take care of the rest of the project.

All these statements surround your No with positives to reassure your customers you recognize and want to support their needs and their best interests. Whether in writing or in face-to-face communications, saying No your customers this way may rescue a project that would add to your bottom line and will certainly improve your customer relationships.

If your conflict with a customer involves a writing project that is out of your scope or if your in-house writing staff is currently overwhelmed, please consider TWP Marketing & Technical Communications as your backup. With 20+ years of freelance, remote experience, I have written website content, blog posts, case studies, articles, and insight papers for large and small companies, nonprofits, and sole-proprietors in nearly every industry, including oil & gas, financial, manufacturing, healthcare, consulting, construction, and software development. I’d be delighted to help you.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

25 Blog Post Ideas

According to WordPress, their users produce 70 million new posts every month and those posts generate over 75 million comments. Why do the posts keep coming?

People search the internet for information and entertainment. When they have a problem to solve–whether they want a new pair of earrings, a software upgrade, or a cure for a common cold–they turn to the internet. When they are curious about how to paint a room or build a rocket, they search the internet. And the advisors they find and remember are the ones who have taken the time to post information and ideas.

Two factors inhibit business owners from taking advantage of this vast market that is actively searching for them: lack of time and lack of ideas. TWP Marketing & Technical Communications can help with both, as we not only write but research and suggest potential blog posts. If you are looking for DIY ideas, here are 25 questions to get you started. Each one deserves at least one blog post:

  1. Why are you in business?
  2. What are industry standards for someone in your business/field?
  3. What do your degrees, certifications, and years of experience mean?
  4. What kind of problems do you solve?
  5. What are the potential solutions/course of action for one problems?
  6. How can customers tell if they have that problem?
  7. What are the potential solutions/course of action for another problem?
  8. How can customers tell if they have that problem?
  9. What process do you use to determine the exact problem?
  10. What types of equipment do you use to solve the problem?
  11. What types of methods do you use?
  12. Why did you choose that process/equipment/method and not another?
  13. How can customers prevent their problem in the future?
  14. How likely is the problem to recur and what should customers do if it does? What will you do?
  15. What did a recent customer say about you and why?
  16. What project have you completed most recently?
  17. What is your favorite project?
  18. What should customers consider when choosing who to work with in your industry/profession?
  19. Are there any scams customers should be warry of?
  20. What questions should customers ask when they call you?
  21. What information do you need?
  22. What should customers do or avoid doing before calling you?
  23. Can customers DIY and, if they can, what do they need?
  24. Who works with you and what is their background?
  25. What are your and your team’s guiding principles for customer service?

TWP Marketing & Technical Communications understands that blog posts, case studies, and insight papers offer value for both your business and the customers you are attracting. Our content makes everyone look good–you for providing the solutions and services you offer and your customers for knowing what to ask and who to work with.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Writing Manners That Matter

In an age of rapid texting, we sometimes forget that there is such a thing as writing manners. Yet, bad writing manners may result in misunderstandings, missed opportunities to connect, and cultural, generational, intellectual, gender, and racial discrimination and exclusion.

So here are nine ways to show that you care about manners when you are writing:

  • You use the correct name of the person you are writing to. You’re more likely to connect if your email is personal. Double check to make sure you spelled the recipient’s name correctly and use the correct title (Dr., Ms., Hon., etc.), if any. If the person has indicated preferred pronouns, use those. You are not allowed to judge or dismiss someone else’s chosen identity.
  • You put communication first. Not everyone recognizes the double meaning of emojis, abbreviations of the moment, or pop culture references. Your company jargon and even common industry acronyms may be unfamiliar to the person you are writing to.
  • You are clear. if you are taking the time to write, then be clear about why you are writing. Explain your purpose or ask your question early on–details can wait until later. Don’t expect the recipient to hunt through paragraph after paragraph before discovering that you’re calling a meeting tomorrow at 9 a.m.
  • You choose kindness. The other person may have annoyed you but your response, like their comments, will last a long time in whatever device they are using. Kindness and restraint always reflect well on you. If you cannot refrain from nastiness, don’t reply.
  • You know your punctuation. Question marks indicate that you expect an answer–no question mark, no question. Exclamation points (which should never be overused!!!) indicate excitement. Periods show you have finished one thought and are beginning another. Consider punctuation the world’s original emoji.
  • You are professional when professional is called for. Avoid humor, politics, jargon, and reprimands in writing. They are easy to misunderstand and they may be resented if they are understood.
  • You are reasonable. The recipient may not be able to answer your text the moment it arrives or may prefer talking to writing or may need to consider before answering. Becoming angry at a “slow” response is counter-productive.
  • You take time to check. Is your email being sent to the correct John Smith or did the email program chose the wrong one? Is your blind copy truly blind?
  • You know when to call. A telephone call or, better still, in person or video conferencing is less painful than spiraling anger or confusion over a written communication that may be misunderstood.

By using your best writing manners, you will reach your objective faster: to let someone else know what you want, offer, need, feel, and think. If you or your team have difficulty creating form or individual content that communicates with manners, contact TWP Marketing & Technical Communications.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Does Your Website Content Strike Fear–in Your Customers?

Recently I reviewed the website of a new company dedicated to cyber security. The proposed design was fine. What caused me to shake my head was the proposed website content.

I am a firm believer that what your customers want when they find your website is the answer to three questions:

  1. Do you have the information I need?
  2. How will you solve my problem?
  3. Why should I choose you?

Navigation presented the first problem for the cyber security website. All the information about services appeared in two places: under the heading “Services” and with precisely the same wording on the home page. That arrangement might have helped with SEO but it left a visitor wondering. Was there nothing more to say? Was the exact repetition an error by a company that should be proclaiming itself attentive to detail?

I’ve never been a big fan of the Services category, especially if in a small website that lacks a search function. I prefer headings that direct customers to the area where they have the most interest. If the big box retailers can do it, so can you.

When your website content focuses on solutions, your customers breathe a sigh of relief: you recognize their pain and you know how to remove it. Instead, the cyber security company focused on the problem. They detailed everything negative that could happen by neglecting cyber security. I could feel my stress level rising with each paragraph I read.

Customers also want assurances of your company’s capabilities. The cyber security website offered one page that detailed the experience and credentials of the business owner and after that–nothing. No testimonials, no case studies, no blog posts. Yes, the owner was well-educated and credentialed but so were his competitors. How were his particular skills used? Did they benefit anyone?

Unfortunately, when your website makes it difficult for customers to find the information they want, harps on problems rather than solutions, and leaves questions about your capabilities, customers are likely to search elsewhere for the help they need. They will choose the company that demonstrates an understanding of both their problem and the potential solutions–and that may not be you.

Make your customers happy and your revenue stream even happier by working with TWP Marketing & Technical Solutions to design website content that attracts customers and keeps them.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Differentiating Your Company from the Competition

Your competitors are on social media and have websites, and they seem to have said everything it is possible to say about the products and services you offer. How do you differentiate yourself so that people understand what makes you stand out?

Consider your online presence to be your company’s resume. As with any resume they’ve ever read, your customers expect to see specific skills and accomplishments and–above all–a reason to believe you can deliver what they want.

To differentiate your company from the competition:

  • Be specific. Define “excellent customer service” with statistics, testimonials, and success stories. If your work is extremely accurate, define “extremely”: within a mile, an inch or a millionth of an inch?
  • Take credit. If you “have the capability of repairing a car in 24 hours,” then you repair cars in 24 hours. The italic statement is more concise, stronger and more believable. “Having a capability” or “striving to” and similar phrases mean nothing to customers unless you follow through. So stand up for what you really do.
  • Let your customers in on the secret. Never assume your customers know what you do or how you do it. Everyone in your industry may use environmentally friendly chemicals. Make sure your customers know you use environmentally friendly chemicals–and tell them why that makes a difference.
  • Share your mission. While your writing goal is differentiating your company from the competition, you want to also address meeting the standards of performance that everyone in your field or industry is expected to achieve.
  • Focus your message. Researchers have proven that people can remember at most 4 chunks of new information. Stay under that limit and concentrate your marketing copy (each marketing brochure, website page, blog, press release or success story) on one major idea at a time.
  • Make it interesting and real. Post before and after photos, pictures or videos of your process or location, case studies, and employee bios so that customers connect with who you are and why you do in several ways.
  • Always put the customer first. None of the previous suggestions will succeed in differentiating your company from the competition unless you concentrate on your customer. The most important customer question to answer, each and every time, is “How can you solve my problem?” Identify your customers’ challenges and tell them concisely and clearly how you can meet them.

Need help in writing marketing copy that differentiates your company from the competition? Give TWP Marketing & Technical Communications a call.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Your Brand New Website: What It Needs and What It Doesn’t

You may have just finished or are committed to building your first website. Congratulations! Now is the time to look at that brand new website or preliminary design to make sure that  you have checked for the following:

  • Very clear contact information. Your contact information or a link to the contact page should appear on every page of your website–at least the phone number. Make sure that the contact information works by trying it yourself periodically.
  • Navigation that tells people who you are. A tab for each major product or service gives visitors more immediate information and leads them more firmly than a generic “services” or “products” tab. Even Amazon manages to lead people to the information they want right now.
  • Security that is strong but easy to satisfy. If your customers have to click through a dozen different levels of security or figure out some obscure picture to actually buy your products and services they will give up. The same goes for multiple “confirm” buttons–help them buy what they want to buy.
  • Content that speaks to the customer. Aim for clear, concise, accurate, and interesting content that tells customers how your business can help them.  Do you enjoy reading a long list of products or services? Being lectured to about how your health or sanity will suffer if you don’t buy a product? Having to wade through paragraph after paragraph of dense text to figure out what you are getting and why you should get it? Neither do your customers.
  • Content that grows. A blog, a series of articles, a few case studies, all add to the richness and interest of your website and help immeasurably with search engine optimization. If you have trouble developing content or lack time, build a relationship with a freelance writer. 
  • Responsiveness. If your website allows people to make comments or send queries, respond to them in a reasonable time. If your website contains downloads, make sure they download quickly.
  • Few annoyances. Asking customers to sign up before they can access parts of your website may annoy them but is understandable. Covering everything they want to see with ads is not, especially if those ads go on and on and on and…  
  • Pictures. Before and after photos, photos of satisfied customers, pictures of your products and services–they all lure in customers and speak much more loudly than words (though you still need words). 
  • Working links. Check your internal links; never assume you are sending customers to the right page. If you link to outside content, check those links periodically to make sure they still exist and that they still send people to safe, interesting content. Just because they worked right when your new website was first built, doesn’t mean they work right now.
  • No mistakes. Proofread, proofread, proofread. Poor grammar and spelling are one sign of a website that might not be legitimate–and you want potential customers to trust you. 

The pandemic certainly taught us all how important it is to have a presence online. If you are building or have recently built a brand new website , there is no need to struggle through alone. Contact TWP Marketing & Technical Communications and take advantage of our experience.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Faster, Better Emails

Whether you are communicating with a client, vendors, or staff, a well-written email saves everyone time and frustration. By being clear in the first place about why you are writing, what you are writing about, and the issues you are dealing with, you avoid endless email cycles and misunderstandings.

Why, What, and How

In your opening statement, summarize the most important facts. In three or four sentences you should be able to explain:

  • Why you are writing (in answer to an email? to confirm a conversation? to inaugurate a project?)
  • What you want to happen (does the recipient need to choose, decide, deliver, take action? Are you going to choose, decide, deliver, take action?)

Don’t wait until the end of a long email to tell your readers what you intend to do or what they need to do–they may never read that far. The details can be saved for later in the email; by providing the “why” and “what” first, you let readers know if the “how” is important. You may also find that the “how” isn’t important–you don’t need all that detail.

When you do need a detailed “how,” you may want end the opening statement with a sentence like this: “The following paragraphs provide more details about the Problem, Possible Solutions, Recommendations, and Next Steps.” Insert the titles over each section that follows.

Let your readers know where you are going up front, and they will follow you from first word to last.

Communication Shortcuts

Endless emails result when people base their decision to read further solely on the subject line, don’t realize that a question has been asked, answer the wrong question or delay because the question seems overwhelming, and never realize you need an answer now. To avoid those problems, use these communication shortcuts:

  • Post your most important point in the subject line. This technique works especially well for meetings (“Marketing meeting 3 p.m., room 4”).
  • If you expect an answer, ask a question; make sure that a question mark appears somewhere in your email.
  • If you have difficulty getting the answers you need, break up complicated questions into questions that must be answered “yes” or “no”; avoid multiple choice.
  • Give a deadline for the response or the action you want. The phrase “as soon as possible” is an invitation to delay.

For help organizing and writing your marketing and technical materials, contact TWP Marketing & Technical Communications today.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Clear Away the Website Confusion

You may be clear about who your customers are and what they want. You may have a strong message. But if you fail to communicate that certainty in your website, your customers become confused and your message becomes muddled.

My job as a freelance writer is to find clear away the confusion so that you feel good about your website–and so do your customers.

  • Shifting audience: A local nonprofit’s website switched back and forth between addressing potential guests, the people they were trying to help, and addressing potential donors. As a result, on the home page, guests became “you” part of the time and “they” the rest of the time. We revised the website to separate the two messages. We also added a help button that let potential guests quickly access help and a donor button that sent potential donors direct to a donate page. With the end of website confusion, clients and donors each understood the message meant for them and were able to act on it.
  • Muddled message: A consultant was transitioning between two main products and considering a new service. As she inserted information here and there into her website, it lost focus and visitors no longer knew where to look first to find what they needed. We went back to her original mission, revised it based on what she truly wanted to do now, and then removed products and services, old or new, that no longer fit the new mission. We cleared up the website confusion, not only for the customers, but for the consultant herself. 
  • Powerful words: More words and longer words don’t equal more power. I like to use the example of two salespeople. One says, “Our professionally engineered, state-of-the-art product has the incredible capability of significantly reducing your annualized monetary outflow” and the other says, “Our product saves you money year after year.” A clear, concise statement that you believe in carries more weight than any string of five syllable adverbs and adjectives.

At TWP Marketing & Technical Communications, we believe in the power of writing that:

  • Meets your customer’s needs
  • Shows you and your customers in the best light
  • Is clear, concise, accurate, and passionate.

Let us bring those elements into your marketing materials, clear away website confusion, and enable your message to shine. Contact us today.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

Working with a Freelance Writer

Are you thinking about hiring a freelance writer? Most often, business owners consider that alternative when their own staff is already overwhelmed; no one on staff is an adequate writer or can agree on content; the business owner has too few writing projects to hire someone full-time; or customers are clearly seeking improved marketing materials, including a new or updated website.

If you are hiring a freelance writer for the first time, here is what you need to know:

1. Find a writer who grew up speaking and writing the primary language of your customers. If the primary language is English, you can certainly find writers from other countries who will write more cheaply than a native speaker–they will also make more cultural, idiomatic, and grammatical mistakes. Look for a freelance writer who considers freelancing a career, not a stepping stone to a full-time job, because you want that writer to be around for your next project. Ask for referrals from those who have already worked with the writer

2. Ask the writer for examples. You need a business-savvy writer with a style that fits your expectations. A portfolio will tell you more than a degree.

3. Understand that writing is a partnership between you and the writer. Writers need to start somewhere to develop content, whether by interviewing you or your customers for information; or by reading all the previous material written about a particular project or product; or by researching your competitors. Even writers who are steeped in your industry–remembering that a writer is a writer first–need access to information or to those who have information about your specific company, products, and services.

4. Keep reality in mind when setting deadlines; writing, editing, research, interviewing–it all takes time. And freelance writers usually have multiple clients who compete for that time. Your freelancer will help you determine a schedule and should keep you up to date every step of the way–if the freelancer fails to meet deadline, and seems to ignore the difficulty that creates for you, find a new freelancer.

5. Know that the customer comes first. What seems perfectly clear to you, with your inside and specialized knowledge, may confuse a potential customer. Your priorities (“let’s list every product we ever manufactured”) may conflict with the customer’s priorities (“tell me you can solve my problem”). A freelance writer’s main goal is to make sure your message is delivered clearly, concisely and passionately to your customers. So while the writer’s words may not be your words, they will be the customer’s.

You freelance writer should be committed to the work of writing, meeting deadlines, communicating clearly and professionally with you and your customers, and delivering content that you and your customers want to read.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.

It’s Time for the Yes

Lately, we’ve had a lot of reasons to feel negative. But smart writers emphasize the positive in their marketing copy.

Negative, bullying tactics (“if you don’t wear a mask, you will die and kill people, stupid”) lose their power pretty quickly. People hate to be badgered (or even inconvenienced, for that matter) and would rather deny the problem. Hope has a much longer shelf life.

So the better positive message is: Masks help keep everyone safe–including you and your loved ones.

When you rewrite sentences to emphasize the positive, you guide your readers to positive action. Every sales person knows that you want your customers to be thinking “yes” long before you ask them for the buy.

Avoiding the “No”

Negatives sneak in when you aren’t looking; in other words, keeping positive requires attention.

If you want to make sure that your message is positive:

  • Search for “not” and its contractions.
  • Read for negative words like “problem” or “unfortunately”–make sure they are warranted and the only choice.
  • Avoid strong negatives (not in stock) by using a milder positive (out of stock).
  • Keep in mind that customers want solutions–they know they have a challenge; right now they want to hear how you will turn it around.

Questions that can be answered with a negative raise the same issues as negative statements. For example, “why not use a mask?” invites a slew of excuses and protests

Negative Questions, Negative Answers

Fear of the negative can be taken too far. Sometimes “not” may add emphasis.For example:

Masks help keep everyone safe–including you and your loved ones. You want to keep safe and so do we. Wishful thinking won’t help. But a mask will.

However, avoid over-using this technique. .

Finding the “Yes”

One reason success stores are so powerful is their ability to tell a positive story for both the customer (who was wise enough to seek help) and the business (which was wise enough to find a solution).

Success stories are only one way to emphasize the positive. Consider photos of your successes (before and after; smiling customers or employees), articles that present potential solutions, and blog posts that explain your methods.

When you become an expert in “yes,” you are welcomed by customers everywhere.

From our base in Peterborough, NH, TWP Marketing & Technical Communications writes marketing copy that engages your customers and delivers your message with accuracy, clarity, and passion.